Friday, September 18th, 2009...6:51 am
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I saw this idea on writingfix.com last night so I thought I’d try it on my blog.
Write a description of this picture in the comments.
35 Comments
September 21st, 2009 at 8:18 am
he is going to try to go down that hill and probably do am ollie or something like that…He will probably fall… if he doesnt then I will be suprised.. He might stop right before he hits the water and he will be lucky
September 21st, 2009 at 8:19 am
It looks like the boy is going to try to skateboard down the very steep hill. He will probably end up in the water if he even survives. He might fall and brake his arm or something.
September 21st, 2009 at 8:21 am
Do it do it
September 21st, 2009 at 8:22 am
he is going to break every bone in his body
September 21st, 2009 at 8:22 am
dude that looks awesome
September 21st, 2009 at 8:25 am
He is going to do it but he is most likely going to end up in the water but that would be awsome I would so do that.
September 21st, 2009 at 8:25 am
it looks like a daredevil little boy about to go down those briges that go up and down,and try to go fast down it then go up high in the sky and land in the water!i feel sorry for him if he doesnt make it lol!
September 21st, 2009 at 8:29 am
he’ll probley get hurt
September 21st, 2009 at 8:30 am
he is going to fall in the water and break every bone in his body.
September 21st, 2009 at 8:31 am
It looks like a little boy maybe 6 or 7 that wants to kill himself by riding down a very very steap hill that leads down into water!!!!!!!!!!!! omg!!!!!!
September 21st, 2009 at 8:31 am
A LITTLE KID IS ON SKATEBOARD A GOING TO SKATE DOWN THAT HILL AND LAND IN THE WATER AND HE MIT BRAKE ONE OF HIS BONES I HOP HIS DOES NOT
September 21st, 2009 at 8:32 am
He is about to go down that steep hill and it goes straight into the sky blue water
September 21st, 2009 at 8:33 am
I think it is a bad choice to try that. But it would probly be fun. But if i where doing that i might fall off so he should nt try that he could get injured. i dont like this picture
Discription: a little boy trying to do a stunt. he is wereing a blue shirt and tan shorts with knee high socks and black shorts. he has blonde hair. this little boy is at the top of the hill and going to atent to fall in the water so he should at least were a hellmet. this picture is a road thet continues into water there is houses surounding him.
September 21st, 2009 at 8:35 am
A boy about 7 or 8 is about to skateboard down a hill that is connced to a ramp over the water.he should be waering a helmet or something to keep his head save.A hope he live to tell the tell.
September 21st, 2009 at 8:35 am
dude this kid does’nt look even 10 years old i wish i knew this kid i’d do it with him
September 21st, 2009 at 8:37 am
this is a little boy who is about 6 years old and is sorounded by houses. he is wereing black shoes, knee high socks, blue shirt, tan shorts. the road hi is traveling on is a dead end into water
September 21st, 2009 at 8:38 am
That kid is in the street, He’s about a mile from the water, and he’s on a skateboard. If he goes down that hill, it’s probably not going to be pretty.
September 21st, 2009 at 8:41 am
a steep road hes about to go down and houses made of bricks!!!!!!!!
September 21st, 2009 at 8:41 am
a 7 year old boy is goin down a tall street like a daredevil with his skatebourd and try to ride and land in the water.i feel very sorry for him if he dies or breaks some bones.lol
:O
September 21st, 2009 at 8:42 am
dude this kid should really think twice befor he dose this because if he dose he’s going to crash into a semi truck a go crying to his mom
September 21st, 2009 at 8:43 am
Well i can see a little boy about 5 or 6 year old boy ridding his skate board down a hill wich look likes he’s going down a hill into a beach there’s allways a gate that stops those who are trying to fall can’t
September 21st, 2009 at 8:47 am
That looks dangerous but awesome. by the angle it looks like hes gonna crashhe is way to young to do that stuff. i bet hes so dso so so scared. his parents should never let him do these kind of things. hes only like six or seven if i was hismom i would let him only go down hills that are smaller than that.
September 21st, 2009 at 8:47 am
A 6 year old boyis on top of a hill desideing what to do. chocie 1 skate bord down the hill wich leads to the water and hope to stop or not do it.
September 21st, 2009 at 10:08 am
This guy has a never ending chain of issues!!!!!!
September 21st, 2009 at 10:14 am
This guy has a never ending chain of issues. Hope he’s got a helmet, snorkel and a body bag!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
September 21st, 2009 at 10:15 am
It looks like he is going to lose control and hit a pole before he even gets close to the water. IDK
:):)
September 21st, 2009 at 10:16 am
This is a weird world that we live in!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
September 21st, 2009 at 10:21 am
there is a kid on a skate-board about to go down a steep steep hill into the ocean or the sea and if he falls that is the last of him there will be all broken bones and in the back of the water there looks like there is a shark about getting ready to eat him
;):-):-o
September 21st, 2009 at 10:23 am
OK, the kid is like a mile away from the water using a SKATEBOARD to go down the very steep hill. When he reaches the straight road, the board will hit the corner and it will in half. While that happens, the dumb kid will be sent flying and will get a face plant when he hits the road. Then he will fall into the water. I also need to say what he needs before he goes down.
1.)Styrofoam around his little body
2.)A waterproof phone that he can use when he is in the water to call 911
3.)A very hard helmet
4.)He needs to be a tough person to live through his surgery
And that’s what he needs to survive the terrifying drop.
September 21st, 2009 at 10:26 am
QUOTE:
“will hit the corner and it will in half.”
to
“will hit the corner and the board will break in half.”
There, issue fixed.
September 21st, 2009 at 10:26 am
It is a boy about 5 years old. He is probably going to go down a hill on his skateboard. He is going to jump in to the water on his skateboard. He is going to break something
September 21st, 2009 at 10:27 am
This boy is so wierd if he goes. If he is a professional he would probrobly be a famous boy. But then again he could have just stand there and take a picture.
September 21st, 2009 at 10:28 am
He is probably going to hit the water and drown or he will get a head injury or something serious.
September 21st, 2009 at 10:35 am
The boy is buried in the sand, another boy is bending down, not showing his head, lookig like he is trying to pull the boy in the sand.
September 21st, 2009 at 10:39 am
Wow this little kid with blond hair wearing a blue shirt and cargo pants on a skate board is brave. He should be wearing a helmet
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